If only you could see the grin on my face as I read this. If anyone walked into the office and really looked at me, they'd know I wasn't working.
I can't believe you've got me reading a WIP. I gave up on WIPs, but for you (and your Mormon missionaries) I'll do anything. I'm deliriously happy right now.
I love the little details. There were so many little lines that made my grin wider, that made me giggle in the right way. Keep up the good work.